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Latest Flash Reviews
Fínn leikur. Mér detta ekki í hug neinar hugmyndir til að gera hann betri.
Og íslenskt efni, vó.
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I liked this movie, but I have some suggestions.
Right, the animation was excellent, very nicely done, and everything was drawn well. It was fluent, and made good of it's style. The humor wasn't the best, but it was still pretty good non the less.
The choices were pretty original, and not that far-fetched, which is pretty good. However, they were only 6, and as I said, they were something that could actually be done. While that may not sound bad, it can't really hurt to add some choices that are completely ridiculous. Hell, if not for anything other than a secret choice.
Also, I have an idea that may be do-able. After you pick all the choices, you are treated to another, correct, choice. This one will be successful, and move the character to a different location, where more choices appear to get past a new obstacle. This could help keep it fresh, lengthen it out, and give players motivation to go on.
Also, I think you are a great animator, and I hope to see more of your stuff later.
:D
Author's Response:
Whoa! Thanks for the large review!
The reason I stayed with six choices was that I was running out of ideas. Most of the ideas I came up with seemed too similar to the other ones. I could have gone with some farfetched ideas though. Thanks for the tip!
As for your idea, I'm planning on doing something similar to that in a sequel. Keep on the look-out for it. (It'll probably be a while though...)
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When I saw beaver-beaver was deleted, I got all sad and stuff because these masterpieces weren't up any more. So yeah, I love how shitty this stuff is, and I love you now for bringing them back up.
<3
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Latest Audio Reviews
It's got that haunting, dark, spooky feeling to it alright
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Thanks alot! That's what I was going for.
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You did a pretty good job there. For some reason it sounded Bond-esque for a bit, bit it's still awesome
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Quite an awesome job you did there
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